Gabler nodding? (ch1-10)

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Gabler nodding? (ch1-10)

Jorn Barger May 2000 (updated Apr2001)

These pages are an updating of my 'online Ulysses repair kit' [qv] with added notes, documenting the choices in my own Ulysses edition [qv].

Overall, it appears Gabler was trying to maximize the number of changes he could justify, resulting in some 1000 dubious choices.

New: Joyce's capitals; Joyce's typists; Joyce's deletions, commas, compounds, other punctuation

Apr2001 updates: Thanks to a generous gift from an anonymous Joycean, I now have the Driver facsimile of the Philadelphia manuscript.

Telemachus: [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

1.3/3.3 "sustained gently behind him by the mild morning air"

not 'on'. G's great error with ch1 was imagining the placards were set from an uncorrected typescript, when in fact they were set from a carefully proofed copy of the Egoist or Little Review. I'll abbreviate similar corrections as 'LR' below.
this one is unusual in that JAJ seems to have changed from 'by' to 'on' but then back to 'by'.
(Driver's annotated 1st edition fails to note the LR variant here!??)

1.6/3.7 "and called up coarsely"

'out' is arguably better but J consistently okayed 'up'. perhaps we should picture the stairs as going up, relative to his tilted head. [LR]

1.10/3.11 "the surrounding country"

not 'land' [LR]

1.21/3.23 "Christine"

J inserted this with a lowercase c, but okayed every subsequent copy with the cap. (G shows an erasure, and if it proves to be replacing an uppercase C I guess I'll change this.) [pic]

1.24/3.26 "a long low whistle of call"

not 'slow' [LR]

1.77 "a great sweet mother"

Gabler may be wrong in changing this from 'grey' because Ulick O'Connor claims Gogarty used the phrase 'our grey sweet mother' in a surviving letter of June 1904 (but UOC calls it a quote from Swinburne and the quote was 'great'!?) [uoc61]

1.83/5.11 "harbour mouth"

G reverts to compound

1.86/5.14 "his grey searching eyes"

G wins this one, barely. the alternatives are 'quick' in J's manuscript and LR/Egoist, or 'great' in most editions

1.128/6.21 "Conolly Norman"

(who cares!)

1.176/7.31 "omphalos"

G overrides all versions by adding italics-- I'll stick with J.

1.194/8.14 "and went across the landing"

G's arguments for dropping 'and I went' suffice, barely

1.248/9.32 "to cover the sun slowly, wholly,"

[LR/G] G in agreement with LR, restoring 'wholly'

1.249/9.33 "It lay beneath him, a bowl"

[LR/G] better poetically than the dubious 'behind'

1.255/10.02 "dancecards powdered"

there's no comma in the Egoist version, and based on J's notebook I think there shouldn't be one (the fans aren't powdered)

1.271/10.18 "her breath bent"

G restored J's comma (again missing in the Egoist) but I prefer this version.

1.279/10.26 "No, mother! Let me be and let me live."

the fixed comma after 'No' is uncontroversial, but G also restored the exclamation point, and though I prefer the period, I have to go with G because Sykes didn't type any exclamation marks.

1.314/11.25 "briskly about the hearth to and fro, hiding and revealing"

G moves 'to and fro' after briskly as in the ms, but I agree with Peake the later versions are an improvement

1.316/11.27 "barbicans"

this spelling was modernised (from barbacans) in the 1932 edition, rejected by G as not-Joyce's. but Kidd says some of the 1932 changes were J's, so I'll risk this one, hesitantly.

1.330 "onto"

J always used 'on to' before Finnegans Wake, but I'll take a chance and override this wherever appropriate

1.333 "But hush!"

G restores an unwelcome comma, again not in the Egoist.

1.383 " damn"

G accepts unhappy period

1.411/14.12 "If we could live on good food"

G rejects 'could only live' in all editions, in favor of the manuscript. I go along for poetic reasons.

1.417/14.18 "Look at that now, she said."

I agree with G that Sykes skipped this line in error

1.428/14.32 "Are you from the west, sir?"

printer eyeskipped 'the'

1.433 "Sure we ought too"

G accepts weak (unJoycean) 'to'

1.444/15.10 "is a shilling. That's a shilling and"

Peake finds the apparent eyeskip from shilling to shilling acceptable, but I prefer G's restoration.

1.449/15.15 "him smiling"

G restores an unwelcome comma, again not in the Egoist.

1.490/16.16 "Would I make money by it?"

a very difficult one, because it might be semantically significant. G restores the manuscript's 'any money' but I agree with Peake we should stick with the version J repeatedly proofed.

1.511 "onto"

1.547/17.40 "he has made to prop it up"

[LR] (G restored the less poetic 'made out')

1.562 "We're"

maybe 'I'm'

1.575 "mailboat, vague on the bright skyline, and a sail"

G deletes the commas

1.602/19.23 "his brief birdlike cries"

[LR]

1.605 "He is... There is"

G accepts unhappy-ish contractions

1.628/19.23 "ferule"

G corrects J's Italianate misspelling to ferrule, but I'll stick with J

1.638/20.27 "I am the servant of two masters"

[LR] (not 'a servant')

1.680 "near him moved"

J included an unhappy comma after 'him'

1.730 "path, and"

J omitted a desirable comma here

Nestor [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

2.24 "tissues"

G reverts to singular

2.25 "Vico Road"

G decaps road, crediting Dalton

2.32 "water"

maybe waves

2.36 "faces. Edith"

G reverts to unhappy colon

2.83 "Of him"

maybe Him

2.98 "A riddle, sir?"

maybe no comma

2.124 "tangled"

G opts for unhappy 'thick' (also at 2.139)

2.141 "underfoot"

1922 has split (also 2.147)

2.167 "swaddling bands"

G reverts (?) to compound

2.170 "stony, sit"

G opts not to restore comma from Little Review

2.171 "tyrants willing"

G restores unneeded comma

2.246 "it seems"

maybe deleted by J

2.288 "ra, lal"

G innovates period-cap, pleading "e"

2.343 "intrigues, by"

G rejects expected comma

2.417 "Hotel"

G innovates no-cap, crediting Dalton

Proteus [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

3.13 "nacheinander"

G reverts to ms cap(s)

3.15 "ineluctably."

G overrides "a1" to restore ms exclam

3.23 "Acatalectic"

I'm accepting G's logic, but this one needs its own page

3.38 "omphalos"

I accept G's reversion to ms italics (but also, less happily, 3.52 euthanasia and 3.54 omophorion??)

3.55 "around"

G reverts to ms 'round'

3.61 "Aunt"

G reverts (?) to no-cap

3.65 "O weeping"

G restores ms comma

3.68 "less."

G overrides "a1" to restore ms exclam

3.97 "here. The"

I accept Dalton's edit

3.99 "All'erta!"

I'm assuming J intended normal formatting for songs here, though it's used in no version I can find

3.115 "footpace (descende!)"

I accept G's restored exclam, but neither G's nor J's comma is needed

3.116 "bald poll!"

G reverts to compound, but that rhythm doesn't work for me with the exclam

3.134 "naked women! naked women!"

I reject G's caps (from P not R) but accept the lost doubling

3.176 "Paysayenn. P.C.N, you know"

ms lacks point after N, which looks better to me

3.196 "back:"

J uses lots of uncharacteristic semicolons in this chapter, but I have to fix this one

3.197 "Rouge,"

G reverts to pointless ms semicolon

3.212 "hands"

G reverts to acrobatic ms singular

3.214 "pus"

I'm reverting to draft no-italics

3.215 "conquistadores"

G reverts to (overkill) ms italics

3.227 "AE pimander"

this (dubious) restoration reads a little better with no comma here

3.233 "La Patrie,"

G reverts to distracting 'la'

3.240 "tobacco shreds"

G pulls a compound from a typist??

3.261 "boys of"

G goes with ms-only compound

3.272 "barbicans"

I accept 1932 correction

3.277 "tower entombing"

G restores unneeded ms comma

3.353 "Out of that"

G reverts to pointless ms compound

3.374 "lord his"

G accepts J's unhappy afterthought comma

3.390 "side-eye"

G reverts to ms erasure of hyphen

3.402 "womb"

G reverts to LR/E's 'moomb', assuming very unlikely placard typo

3.405 "Thanking you for hospitality tear the blank end off."

G restores 'the' after for

3.429 "jess"

G 'corrects' to jesse

3.455 "passing chafing"

G reverts (?) to comma

3.470 "one he"

G reverts to unneeded ms comma

3.473 "landward, a pace a pace a porpoise"

a messy one-- G swaps the phrases, and claims J may have dropped the last 'a'

3.487 "his my"

G reverts to unhappy ms compound

3.491 "when is it?"

G reverts to ms no-q-mark

Calypso [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

4.21 "kindly, the"

G reverts to ms no-comma

4.58 "did not"

G reverts to ms (?) contraction

4.80 "reflects (refracts is it?)"

G indulges J's extra commas

4.84 "dawn, travel"

G reverts to ms period-and-cap

4.89 "crosslegged smoking"

G restores J's ambiguous comma

4.95 "watches"

G restores unhappy ms 'watches me'

4.111 "Bald head"

G reverts (?) to ms compund

4.133 "it with"

G restores unhappy ms 'you'

4.135 "Or more"

makes more sense than 'O more'

4.138 "Inishturk, Inishark"

G accepts printer's period

4.142 "links packed with forcemeat"

G restores unneeded ms commas

4.154 "He took up a page"

G reverts to 'a page up'

4.178 "Eccles Lane"

G decaps lane, crediting Dalton

4.210 "Arbutus Place"

I'll revert to ms cap-P, intuitively

4.240 "Road"

I'll refuse G's no-cap (pleading "e")

4.266 "onto"

4.279 "fingers, ringwise,"

G deletes commas, pleading "e"

4.288 "looking glass"

G reverts to ms compound

4.387 "onto"

4.505 "pounds thirteen"

G reverts to unneeded comma

4.508 "patiently, that"

G reverts to ms no-comma

4.534 "then black"

G reverts to unneeded colon

Lotus-eaters [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

5.2 "crusher's"

G reverts to crusher

5.11 "undertaker's"

G quietly reverts to undertaker

5.62 "Flower, Esq"

G rejects comma

5.79 "the letter"

G restores duplication

5.94 "E... eleven"

G would have us believe the typist substituted this reading for 'Eeleven'!

5.109 "Doran, Lyons"

G rejects helpful comma

5.142 "O yes... O well"

G reverts to unneeded commas

5.151 "Ulster hall"

G reverts to cap-H

5.156 "man. Cat"

G restores 'Letter.'

5.157 "Love's"

G restores periods after each word/line

5.176 "Well, tolloll"

G reverts to period-cap

5.194 "tonight: Mrs"

G reverts to period

5.195 "Hamlet"

G overrides "a2" to de-italicize (presuming role not play)

5.197 "talk about"

G reverts to 'talk of'

5.203 "Nathan's voice!"

I accept G's rejection of dialog-dash, overriding "aR,(aD)

5.208 "O dear! O dear! "

G restores commas

5.223 "cabbies: all"

G innovates period-cap (?)

5.246 "word. Are"

G reverts to (less poetic) qmark

5.255 "headache. today. and"

I'll accept G's reconstruction w/periods

5.259 "x x x x"

I'll accept G's restoration (cf Hester's letter 18.623)

5.302 "flutter then"

G reverts to (unpoetic) comma

5.323 "Claver and"

G guesses 'S.J.' based on Little Review

5.323 "mission"

G reverts oddly to cap

5.331 "distinguished looking... altar rails... confession box... witness box"

G reverts to compounds

5.352 "corpse why"

G innovates plausible period-cap, crediting Dalton

5.384 "O no she's"

G restores two commas

5.385 "way did"

G restores unneeded comma

5.402 "homo?"

G reverts to period

5.403 "music is... the Gloria... were keen"

G deletes is-the-were, following "C" not "D" (?)

5.406 "too chanting"

G innovates plausible comma

5.423 "Joseph her"

G restores unneeded comma

5.445 "pray):"

G restores an exclam in there, too

5.455 "Annoyed..."

G has a wordy note about the sequence here

5.520 "Bloom, what's"

G innovates period-cap

5.523 "Lyons'"

G reverts to Lyons's

5.560 "Buller"

see Kidd

Hades [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

6.10 "twice"

maybe 'tight'

6.11 "carriage window"

G reverts to plausible compound (typescript lost)

6.20 "Grows"

maybe 'Grow'

6.22 "soap in"

G restores unneeded colon

6.69 "wheels."

G innovates plausible colon, crediting Dalton

6.78 "window, watching"

G rejects happy comma

6.144 "O draw"

G restores unneeded comma

6.149 "Trenchant... retrospective arrangement"

G restores unneeded italics

6.156 "on, please"

G rejects happy comma

6.169 "waistcoat pocket"

G rejects split

6.183 "Saint Mark's"

G rejects needed cap-S (placename)

6.185 "The Lily of Killarney"

Gabler is content with Joyce's 'the' (no italic, no cap) but it's plainly wrong-- the poster would definitely say 'The'

6.199 "reply: passed"

G restores attractive 'spruce figure:', but J may have decided to keep it just a glimpse of hat

6.238 "humming: voglio.. No: vorrei"

G reverts twice to period-cap

6.253 "elephant"

G reverts to inconsistent cap

6.284 "quay. More"

G reverts to no-period-no-cap

6.297 "Ah, then"

G fails to restore happy comma

6.313 "wide open"

G rejects sD split

6.352 "morning start"

G opts for unhappy period-cap

6.354 "umbrella:"

G rejects "a1"s colon

6.361 "Venetian blind"

maybe plural

6.361 "coroner's ears"

G restores awkward 'sunlit'

6.392 "Thursday of"

G reverts to unneeded comma

6.393 "twentyseven... ninetynine"

sD requests splits

6.393 "Roast beef"

G reverts to compound

6.416 "onto... onto"

6.440 "barge between"

G restores unneeded comma

6.456 "weeping I suppose."

G reverts to comma and qmark

6.464 "Geary the sexton's an"

G restores two commas, 1926 has one?

6.467 "by, one"

G reverts to colon

6.509 "saluted. [par] Coffin"

G rejects par, for no stated reason

6.532 "himself!"

G reverts to plausible qmark

6.575 "wreath, looking"

G rejects needed comma!

6.575 "sleek combed"

G rejects sD split

6.585 "prayingdesks"

sD requested split, but it reads wrong

6.589 "server, bearing... it, came"

G blames happy commas on typist

6.595 "Dominenamine."

G quietly rejects italics

6.608 "Butchers for"

G restores unneeded comma

6.609 "saint Werburgh's"

(shouldn't this be capped?)

6.612 "doner"

G claims 'goner' was from "s6"?

6.620 "that of"

G restores unneeded comma

6.625 "business men"

G innovates compound, crediting Dalton

6.634 "the other"

G accepts 'one' even though it's obviously a typo-fix

6.635 "last, folding"

G rejects happy comma

6.661 "gravely, looking"

G rejects badly-needed comma

6.662 "secret searching"

G rejects sD split

6.665 "church, used in Mount Jerome, is simpler, more impressive, I"

G rejects all commas but one, despite J's proofing

6.693 "Madam"

G reverts to (French?) Madame

6.710 "said, pleased... side, puzzling"

G rejects happy commas

6.720 "watch chain"

G rejects split (typescript missing)

6.725 "grave, sure"

G rejects comma

6.741 "out, no"

G reverts to inferior period-cap

6.776 "corpse manure"

G reverts to compound, overriding "sD" and "a1"

6.777 "pink, decomposing"

G rejects happy comma

6.810 "No ants"

G imposes happy comma, crediting Dalton

6.843 "Well it"

G restores unneeded comma

6.895 "said, scribbling... slowly, without"

G rejects happy commas

6.950 "Hu!"

G reverts to ms 'Hoo'

6.986 "fever pit"

G reverts (?) compound-plural, overriding "a1"; I revert to singular to match 'chamber'

6.1006 "Menton. John"

G reverts to comma

6.1011 "bowling green"

G rejects sD split

6.1018 "said, pointing"

G rejects comma

6.1029 "finger without"

G restores unneeded comma

Eolus [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

Gabler did a respectable job on this one, although he rejects typescript corrections as "sD" not Joyce, when they were surely Joyce's.

7.33 "printing works"

G rejects sD split

7.45 "stately"

G reverts to unhappy 'statelily'

7.57 "Jesus Mario"

Kidd accepts G's reversion to Jesusmario, but I don't see how the printer could have misread the typescript in exactly the style of the manuscript!?!

7.70 "through the sidedoor"

Kidd protests G's (happy, to my ear) reversion to 'a' here

7.72 "Thumping, thumping."

Kidd protests G's reversion to period-cap

7.76 "Hynes..."

I warily accept G's relocating this par above the headline

7.76 "Thumping thump."

G reverts to period-cap

7.89 "weekly not"

G innovates a plausible but not necessary comma

7.102 "no one"

G quietly reverts to plausible hyphen (blaming sD?)

7.157 "High class"

G quietly reverts to compound

7.171 "could"

G reverts to should

7.172 "No, I"

G reverts to period

7.206 "mangiD."

G reverts to no-period, overriding "a1" and "a2" and "a3"

7.211 "butcher and"

G reverts to period-cap

7.217 "onto"

7.219 "Number? Yes."

G restores 'Yes.'

7.220 "Twentyeight... MacHugh... windowpane... ninetyfive... barefoot"

sD requests splits (note for MacHugh: "esp. fine")

7.223 "these"

G reverts to less-happy 'those'

7.231 "see: before: dressing"

I'd be happy with 1922's no-colons, if I knew where they went

7.239 "fireplace"

sD requests hyphenation, thruout

7.245 "'mid"

I accept G's restoring leading-apostrophe, overriding "a1"

7.245 "banks fanned"

unneeded comma here

7.262 "vice-chancellor"

G reverts to compound-no-hyphen

7.270 "Cicero's"

G reverts to tempting ms 'Cicero'

7.305 "their"

G reverts to 'the' overriding "a1"

7.325 "The moon..."

G moves this par above the headline.

7.328 "shines"

G reverts to ms 'shine' (subjunctive?) overriding "a1"

7.342 "Entertainments open house."

G opts for period-cap-O

7.342 "blow out... Twenty eight"

G rejects sD splits

7.385 "Twenty eight... No, twenty... Double four... Yes."

G rejects ellipses, reverting to period-period-cap-period-comma-no-cap

7.390 "onto"

7.411 "Yes... ...To where...? ...I see..."

G rejects these ellipses for periods

7.462 "cigarette case"

G overrides "a1" to impose compund, pleading only "e"!?

7.490 "Jews"

messy: J normally didn't use cap, but cf 'Roman' just below

7.514 "railway line"

G rejects happy sD split (also 7.588)

7.530 "answered, blushing"

G rejects comma

7.557 "Dominus!"

G reverts to plausible 'Domine!' but sD underlined this form

7.557 "Lord Jesus? Lord Salisbury?"

messy: 1922 has exclam and period???

7.591 "Castile"

esthetically I like 1922's Castille, but historically and genetically, Castile seems the safer choice

7.600 "Bastille"

G defends J's Bastile

7.603 "We were..."

G again moves this above the headline (???)

7.635 "said, turning"

G rejects comma

7.639 "mean, Joe"

G reverts to period-cap

7.640 "Skin-the-Goat"

I accept G's reversion to cap-G for purely esthetic reasons

7.648 "is he?"

G reverts to plausible 'is it?' but cf 7.644 just above

7.667 "alibi. Inchicore"

G reverts to comma

7.672 "Burke's"

G imposes 'Davy's' for (unneeded) consistency, crediting Dalton

7.669 "publichouse... publichouse... leadenfooted... wellchosen... matchbox... soultransfigured... soultransfiguring"

sD requested splits

7.692 "Hello...? Are you there...?"

G rejects ellipses

7.719 "...mentreche"

G 'corrects' this to 'Mentre che' overriding "a1" and "a2"

7.722 "in gold"

G claims J tried to delete happy 'in'

7.734 "gutter sheet... master mystic"

G reverts to compounds-- but no sD requests here???

7.757 "Michelangelo"

sD (?) requested 'Michael Angelo'

7.757 "Vatican"

G rejects sD's cap

7.760 "cigarette case"

G rejects sD split (also 7.791)

7.793 "John F. Taylor"

G perversely depoints (also 7.823)

7.794 "lord justice"

sD requests caps

7.795 "days) advocating"

G accepts J's unneeded comma

7.802 "a sweet thing in a child's frock, Myles Crawford said."

G's note explaining why he puts Fitzgibbon back in the frock is wonderfully fatuous

7.805 "diction, I"

G rejects interesting comma

7.814 "sick bed"

G innovates compound, crediting Dalton

7.817 "loose neckcloth"

G restores uncopied insertion 'white silk' but I find it wordy enough to reject

7.838 "highpriest... letterbox moneybox"

sD requests splits (not 7.832 highpriest though)

7.870 "enjoying silence"

G restores unhappy 'a'

7.875 "expectorated demise"

(if you drop the hyphen after 'A' then this should go too)

7.879 "said, uncontradicted"

G perversely rejects comma

7.892 "boosing shed"

G imposes compound, for odd reasons

7.899 "cried, slapping"

G reverts to ms 'clapping', ignoring consonant-clash

7.901 "pocket, pulling... said, nodding... said, throwing"

G rejects happy commas

7.928 "glistening"

G reverts to unhappy ms 'glistering'

7.940 "dining rooms'

G rejects sD split

7.961 "Yes, he said..."

G again moves above headline

7.1012 "Saint"

Kidd points out this needs the ms cap

7.1019 "onehandled"

sD requests hyphen, also at 7.1072 but not 7.1018??

7.1057 "Palestine or The"

I'll hesitantly accept G's cap-T and de-italic 'or'

Lestrygonians [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

I have the JJA facsimile of the typescript here, which is very revealing. The typewriter had an unresponsive spacebar so many, many words are run together. Someone went thru and marked these for repair, also splitting a lot of J's compounds. But most of these compounds (not all) survived unsplit into 1922. G hardly mentions this layer (an occasional "sD"), rejecting it as not-Joyce.

But Joyce clearly went over the typescript very carefully, changing many details of punctuation etc, so it's inconceivable to me that sD was anyone else. So the splits look to me like J trying for episode-specific styling (LB's sluggish mind taking words one by one), as with the extra commas in Eumeus.

But since many of the most extreme splits (eg 'pine apple') didn't survive, I'll go with 1922 in general.

8.1 "throne, sucking"

G reverts to no-comma

8.13 "Dowie, restorer... Zion, is"

G opts for no-commas

8.15 "Is coming!"

G blames indent-and-italics on typo

8.19 "crucifix?"

G devotes a note to explaining why he's suspicious of qmarks in Bloom's interior stream, but there are tons of examples

8.28 "auctionrooms"

sD requests split (although the symbol may be modified to mean 'stet'?)

    -|-       |        -|- 
    -|-       |        -|- 
     |        |         |
     |       -|-       -|-
     |       -|-       -|-
   normal   ditto    special?

8.39 "bridge piers"

G rejects sD split

8.47 "porter, wonderful"

G rejects needed comma

8.50 "Well of course"

G perversely restores commas

8.52 "quay walls"

G rejects 1922 split, probably J's

8.57 "thirtytwo"

sD requests split

8.67 "Hamlet"

G imitates ms formatting, ignoring note to printer in J's hand

8.76 "silently two, then all, from"

G reverts to comma after silently, none after all. the typescript shows a comma deleted (by someone) after silently, with a curlicue in the margin that I think means B-for-blank/blanc

8.77 "morsel. [par] Aware"

G perversely rejects par

8.79 "sea birds"

G rejects 1922 split, probably J's

8.79 "seagoose"

sD requests split

8.83 "wheeled, flapping"

G rejects happy comma

8.85 "turkey, say,"

G rejects commas

8.85 "chestnut meal"

G overrides "a4" to restore compound

8.89 "board."

(why not colon?)

8.90 "Kino's"

(HTML 'center' indents this a lot more than I'd like, but it matches G pretty well, and looks better than blockquote)

8.100 "Flybynight"

1922 has plausible 3 words

8.102 "If he...?"

I'll warily accept G's qmark

8.109 "Timeball on the ballast office"

sD requests both be split, 1922 splits the latter (also at 8.114), G rejects splits

8.112 "pikehoses"

G reverts to plausible ms two-words, blaming typist, but it was never fixed (also 8.1148)

8.119 "wit?"

G rejects qmark

8.123 "men"

G innovates 'sandwichmen' based on LR's 'sandwich men'

8.130 "no: M'Glade's"

G reverts to comma

8.132 "show cart... blotting paper"

G rejects splits

8.142 "Dame Street"

G rejects cap though it represents a printed ad. J's hand could easily be small-s

8.146 "of woman"

G restores plausible 'of a'

8.149 "She knew, I"

a killer! G restores 'She knew I, I' from ms, but typescript shows 'B' written on top of the first 'I'

8.159 "ninetyfour"

sD requests split

8.159 "died, yes that's right,"

G rejects happy commas

8.161 "fell, Bobbob"

G overrides "a5" to restore period, blaming typo

8.163 "elephantgrey"

G says J requested compound at "a1" (against episode style?)

8.165 "wore it"

G opts not to restore LR's happy 'it'

8.169 "Rabbit pie"

G perversely rejects ms AND sD, opting for compound

8.171 "wallpaper, Dockrell's"

G opts for period (sD requests 'wall paper'!??)

8.172 "bathwater"

sD requests split

8.182 "waxedup"

sD requests 'waxe dup'???

8.185 "supper room"

G rejects sD split

8.186 "the Mansion house"

maybe no-cap

8.187 "high school"

G innovates 'High school', pleading "e"

8.192 "gust?"

G rejects qmark

8.197 "stays. White."

G reverts to colon-no-cap

8.199 "herself"

G reverts to two words, blaming typist--though sD doesn't split

8.199 "two, taking"

G rejects comma

8.200 "hairpins"

sD requests split

8.201 "beddyhouse"

sD requests split

8.209 "Yes, in"

G reverts to period-cap

8.213 "black, I see. You have no...?"

I accept G's comma and qmark as typist oversights (!?)

8.217 "O dear me"

G restores unneeded comma after O

8.225 "womaneyes"

sD requests split

8.226 "Just quietly"

G quietly rejects sD's striking of colon after Just

8.229 "rattlesnakes... lawbooks... handbag"

sD requests splits

8.258 "U.P:"

G innovates 'U.p:'; I agree on losing the last point but not the cap until 8.274 and 8.320

8.271 "mockturtle"

sD requests split

8.274 "ago, Dolphin's"

G reverts to period, overriding "a4"

8.278 "club"

G reverts to plausible cap

8.279 "masterstroke"

sD requests split

8.295 "river, staring"

G rejects happy comma

8.296 "heavy stringed"

G reverts to compound, overriding sD

8.297 "skullpiece... dustcoat... lampposts... Goodbye... skullpiece... fortyfour... vicereine... Foodheated... cobblestones... sourapple"

sD requests splits

8.303 "said, smiling"

G rejects happy comma

8.316 "stick, umbrella, dustcoat"

G overrides "sD" and "a5" to restore 'stickumbrelladustcoat'

8.321 "house, I"

G quietly reverts to no-comma

8.332 "Geo"

G quietly restores period overriding sD

8.335 "exc ...Resp "

G restores plausible points

8.338 "today"

G reverts to tempting 'toady' overriding sD

8.381 "it pensive"

G accepts typist's unrhythmic 'the'

8.383 "establishments, whole thing quite painless, out"

G rejects happy ms commas, 1922 had unhappy period-cap-no-comma

8.384 "twentyone,"

sD requested split (also 8.387) and comma, "a1" undid the split (!?), G rejects the comma

8.385 "pounds, multiply... system, encourage... sum, more"

G quietly rejects commas

8.393 "after!"

G rejects exclam

8.407 "Goose step"

G sees (ambiguous) compound

8.409 "into"

G reverts to jarring 'in'

8.412 "railings, making"

G reverts to no-comma

8.423 "horse policeman"

G rejects sD split

8.444 "know. All"

G reverts to unhappy no-period-or-cap

8.445 "plain clothes"

G reverts to compound overriding "sD" and "a1"

8.446 "Squarepushing... Hotblooded... squareheaded... Homerule... northwest"

sD requests split, reversed by 'bon' in margin (also for plainclothes above)

8.455 "get along"

G quietly reverts to 'gelong' (blaming printer!??)

8.456 "Tobacco shopgirls"

sD requests 3 words, G grants one only

8.459 "in, the"

G reverts to unhappy period-cap

8.463 "Or gas"

I warily accept G's restortion here

8.471 "Thought"

if I read G right, J was trying to delete leading 'The'

8.472 "Show"

maybe Shove

8.473 "Home Rule"

sD requested split, marginal 'bon' reversed this, G opts for plausible Homerule

8.486 "piledup... jerrybuilt... woebegone...twoheaded"

sD requests splits

8.492 "houses, built"

G reverts to no-comma

8.493 "No one"

G reverts to less-poetic standard hyphen

8.497 "there. Wouldn't"

G offers a wordy rationalization for restoring 'Like a mortuary chapel.' here

8.499 "silver ware"

G rejects split that sD requested and got

8.500 "in Walter Sexton's window opposite"

G thinks J moved opposite to front of this phrase

8.506 "Boulger"

J changed this to 'Kavanagh' for the Little Review, which G prefers

8.518 "house of commons"

1922 has caps

8.527 "poet Mr Geo"

G restores unneeded comma and period

8.527 "A.E:"

ms allowed this happier form

8.537 "Wind and watery"

G overrides successful sD to restore too-happy compound

8.543 "ethereal"

Kidd implies J okayed this correction from etherial

8.552 "field glasses"

G rejects successful sD split

8.553 "Wellmannered"

sD requests split

8.554 "lenses, six"

G rejects sD comma

8.557 "cloak rooms"

G rejects sD split

8.569 "Looking up from the back garden."

I accept G's restoration, assuming it was overlookable on ms

8.571 "it, that"

G rejects sD's comma

8.580 "to his side again"

I hope G is wrong in moving 'again' to the end of this phrase

8.582 "Gas, then solid, then world, then cold,"

G rejects sD's commas-for-colons (why in the world would anyone but J himself make such a change???)

8.583 "rock like"

G reverts to unneeded comma, overriding "a1"

8.584 "pineapple"

sD requests split, reversed in margin

8.586 "Maison"

G reverts to tempting ms no-cap

8.589 "humming: the"

messy: everybody has awkward cap-T; G reverts to ms period; LR had italics; I'll de-cap the t

8.593 "quick breathing"

G rejects sD split

8.593 "walking, passed"

G rejects comma

8.594 "With a keep quiet relief, his eyes took note: this is street here middle of the day Bob Doran's bottle shoulders."

G rejects sD's changes: ha->a, colon-added, 'the' deleted before street. G also restores typist (?) deletions: 'quiet keep quiet' and 'of Bob'

8.597 "streetwalkers... harvestmoon... twentythree... hoofthuds... chawbacon... rainwater... Sunwarm... meatjuice"

sD requests splits

8.612 "home, you"

G rejects comma pleading "e"

8.615 "silk dames and dowagers"

1922 has a comma after silk, G opts for silkdames

8.617 "Country bred"

G rejects sD split

8.623 "La causa è santa!"

G overrides "a1" to revert to ms version

8.623 "Taree tara."

I accept G's restoration of 'Taree' here, but not the italics thruout.

8.635 "silk webs"

G rejects sD split

8.641 "Jingling hoofthuds"

G restores plausible comma

8.651 "slop"

G opts for tempting 'slush' from LR

8.660 "gristle: no"

G restores 'gums:' from LR

8.670 "Spaton"

(I'm sorely tempted to revert to much clearer ms 'Spat-on')

8.670 "cigarette smoke"

G reverts to compound (plausibly blaming typist)

8.707 "children, cabmen, priests, parsons, fieldmarshals, archbishops"

G rejects commas (sD's from priests on)

8.711 "drinkingcup... sheepsnouts bloodypapered... nosejam"

sD requests splits

8.715 "soup pot"

G rejects sD's split

8.721 "garlic of course it stinks Italian organgrinders crisp of onions, mushrooms, truffles"

1922 wraps 'of course' in commas (where from?); G rejects all commas, overriding "a1" for last two (1922 lost the last??)

8.730 "smoking hot"

G overrides sD and "a4" to restore compound

8.742 "mustered"

G reverts to odd double-r

8.754 "Eat, drink"

G quietly reverts to no-comma

8.755 "Mity cheese"

but 1922's 'Mighty' may be Bloom's pun?

8.759 "burgundy: take"

G rejects sD's unhappy semicolon altogether

8.759 "cucumber. Tom"

G devotes a note to arguing this should be a comma

8.801 "boxing match"

G reverts to plausible compound

8.809 "tuckstitched shirtsleeves... horseflesh... Orangegroves"

sD requests splits

8.819 "disgust, pungent"

G rejects sD's much-needed comma

8.825 "It ruined many a man the same horses."

G restores ms comma after 'man' but Niall Montgomery (in 1951) singled out "the precision of the dropped comma" here, and Kenner made this the only point on which he questioned Gabler's judgment

8.834 "petty cash"

G rejects sD's split

8.843 "champing standing"

G reverts to unhappy comma

8.844 "numskull"

G rejects sD's deletion of 'b' (but who else but J would bother??)

8.852 "Six, six."

G reverts to period-cap

8.853 "She..."

G reverts to period

8.864 "oysters?"

G quietly reverts to plausible period

8.865 "Red bank oysters... He was in the Red Bank"

very messy: I'll accept G's restoring cap-B for 2nd only (the restaurant name). but the oysters themselves are from Red Bank south of Galway, not from a generic bank of the Red

8.867 "table. Perhaps... bed. No."

G rejects sD's periods-n-caps

8.871 "it. No. Yes, or"

G rejects sD, reverting to no-punct-no-caps

8.873 "course, aristocrats. Then"

G rejects sD, reverting to 'course aristocrats, then'

8.876 "Cheap no-one would buy."

sD changed to unhappy 'Cheap. No one...' (???)

8.880 "sturgeon. High sheriff, Coffey the"

G rejects cap-H (sD) and period (printer?) even though J amended the sentence without correcting period-cap. I'm deleting the unneeded comma after Coffey (pleading "j")

8.890 "Du, de la, French."

1926 has comma after 'de'; G silently rejects commas

8.891 "fish, perhaps old Micky Hanlon of Moore street ripped the guts out of making money, hand over fist, finger in fishes' gills, can't write his name on a cheque, think"

G rejects all commas, some sD

8.894 "Ha. Ignorant"

G rejects sD's period-cap

8.898 "winepress... earwigs... gumjelly... nannygoat"

sD requests splits

8.900 "Howth. Below"

G rejects sD period-cap

8.908 "sweetsour of her spittle"

G's happy restoration

8.909 "Soft, warm, sticky... gods, golden"

G rejects sD commas

8.927 "Nectar, imagine"

G silently rejects comma

8.928 "woman"

G blames typist for happy-ish singular, passively accepted by J

8.931 "fall see"

G argues J tried to change this to less happy 'drop. See' ('drop' is perhaps more lestrygonian in tone? or too??)

8.962 "He's an excellent brother."

G's restoration (but how would Nosey know?)

8.964 "a-- well"

I accept G's reversion from comma (maybe sD?)

8.967 "it, but"

G reverts to period-cap

8.973 "Saint Legers"

G reverts to unhappy small-s

8.975 "tearwashed... gingerpop... Breadsoda... suckingbottle... closestools... bookstore... dyeworks... Postoffice'"

sD requests splits

8.977 "him, you"

G reverts to unneeded dash

8.1006 "said, look"

G reverts to period-cap

8.1032 "cobble stones"

G temptingly rejects sD split

8.1035 "his."

G overrides "a1" to restore qmark

8.1037 "or place"

G fails to delete probable typist's 'a'

8.1039 "echo the"

I accept Dalton's de-comma here

8.1040 "Don"

G overrides sD (?) to handle as dialog not verse (leading dash, not indented, also 8.1053)

8.1045 "closestools, waiting, in"

G overrides "a1" to revert to no commas

8.1048 "body, changing biliary duct, spleen squirting liver, gastric"

G rejects commas (sD and a1)

8.1057 "ten, about"

G rejects happy sD comma

8.1064 "watering places... wall face... public house"

G rejects sD splits

8.1071 "Rome. Birds' Nest women"

way messy: sD (???) changed to bizarre qmark, underlined and cap-N'd Bird's Nest, and period-capped 'Nest. Women'

8.1074 "Why we left the church of Rome?"

G restores italic and rejects qmark

8.1097 "hand his"

G restores unhappy comma

8.1110 "removed?"

G reverts to period

8.1119 "Work basket"

G blames split on typist

8.1128 "temperature when"

G reverts to plural-with-colon

8.1140 "between waistcoat"

G restores awkward 'his'

8.1142 "whiteyellow"

G reverts to 'whitey yellow' overriding "a1"

8.1149 "Pity of "

G restores plausible comma

8.1162 "excellency"

G reverts to cap

8.1163 "Sixteenth today"

G rejects sD to restore period-cap

8.1172 "Not see. Not see."

G blames dup on typo, but it works and J allowed it

8.1173 "strides"

G claims J tried to change this to (timider) 'steps'

8.1178 "No, didn't"

G reverts to period-cap

8.1185 "Busy looking for."

G claims J tried to drop 'for'

8.1192 "Ah, soap"

G rejects happy "a6" comma!??

Scylla & Charybdis [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

9.2 "Meister?"

G reverts to period

9.7 "attendant, setting... slightly,"

G reverts to no-commas

9.16 "Palisse"

G reverts to pre-26 Palice

9.28 "W.B."

G depoints

9.29 "Glittereyed, his... face,"

G de-commas

9.34 "Ed egli..."

this line sorely wants de-italicising

9.38 "rabbi. The"

G reverts to colon-no-cap

9.39 "Godspeed"

G reverts to two words

9.97 "public."

G reverts to comma

9.123 "French, the"

G reverts to period-cap

9.151 "king Hamlet"

G reverts to ms K

9.170 "spirit"

G reverts to ms comma

9.177 "twin)"

G imposes strictly-needed comma

9.190 "Flow..."

G doesn't explain why he doesn't indent this, so presumably he blames the printer

9.200 "no."

G reverts to unhappy cap

9.246 "The girl I left behind me"

G reverts to (unhappy) ms cap-G

9.266 "--Between"

I warily accept G's restoring leading dash (to differentiate it from SD's thoughts)

9.284 "god he"

G restores unneeded comma

9.303 "thing, genius"

G reverts to no-comma

9.308 "don Quixote"

G blames decap on typist

9.322 "-- Synge"

G overrides p1E errata list and rejects leading dash, as this par is not strictly direct quotation (from a single speaker)

9.337 "treeforks from"

G imposes unneeded comma, pleading "e"!?!

9.362 "mean I"

G restores unneeded comma

9.366 "imo"

G corrects to 'in mo'

9.373 "eyes, glinting"

G reverts to no-comma

9.403 "Shipwrecked... Tried"

G reverts to no-cap-S, concealing flattened poem

9.406 "girl placed"

G restores unneeded comma

9.444 "rejected, such"

G dismisses happy comma without comment

9.450 "There is"

G reverts (?) to ambiguous ms contraction

9.455 "and he had"

G restores dubious 'he' from ms

9.456 "(ryefield"

G restores ms 'a ryefield'

9.470 "king Hamlet's"

G imposes cap-K

9.482 "Amen! responded"

G restores slightly-more-jarring 'was responded' from ms

9.485 "forward then, blithe"

J misplaced comma after forward

9.492 "pseudomalachi"

G reverts to ms 'pseudo Malachi' which I'll accept only if 'pseudomalachi' can't refer to Photius...?

9.493 "begot, middler the Holy Ghost, and"

G reverts to no-commas, overriding "a1"

9.507 "puzzled:"

G substitutes period, citing Dalton

9.512 "him:"

G reverts to ms period

9.526 "Wills."

G restores very unhappy ms qmark

9.528 "hues the colour"

G restores unneeded comma after hues

9.553 "the Ship"

G reverts to 'The''

9.568 "down:"

G reverts to ms period

9.577 "Saint-André-des-Arts"

G reverts to ms no-hyphens, overriding "a1" [needs italics?]

9.599 "Last year."

restored by G, with editorial period

9.599 "please...?"

G reverts to ms no-qmark

9.600 "Or please"

G restores ms comma

9.610 "when"

G silently (??) reverts to unhappy ms 'where'

9.620 "stayathome"

G reverts to ms hyphens, plausibly blaming typist

9.626 "feudalism as"

I accept G's reversion to ms no-comma

9.630 "gombeen woman"

G reverts to ms compound

9.640 "bankside a"

G accepts unneeded comma

9.641 "Cours-la-Reine"

G reverts to ms no-hyphens, overriding "a1" [needs italics?]

9.648 "seats, as"

G reverts to no-comma

9.651 "Fetter Lane"

G quietly reverts to plausible ms 'lane'

9.669 "wooer twice"

G restores plausible ms comma, but compare 9.657 above

9.672 "infamy, tell"

G quietly loses happy comma

9.684 "To whom thus Eglinton: You"

G moves this intro onto the same line with the start of the (indented) speech. (I've used HTML 'center' as a compromise, also at 9.689 and 9.691)

9.700 "Punkt"

G reverts to ms uncentered-with-period

9.726 "A quart of ale is a dish for a king."

G restores unneeded ms italic

9.758 "inspired The Merry"

G overrides "aC" to remove italic The, and de-caps blaming printer

9.774 "rune."

G imposes plausible colon, pleading "e"

9.778 "Stephen, smiling, said"

G de-comma-fies

9.847 "you!"

G reverts to ms period

9.858 "Monsieur-le-Prince"

G de-hyphens

9.870 "born for"

G imposes happy comma

9.905 "(Laughter.)"

G quietly de-caps and de-periods (also at 9.907, 9.917, 9.919, 9.921)

9.929 "firedrake rose"

G restores plausible comma

9.933 "midnight, returning"

G reverts to ms no-comma

9.941 "amar"

G reverts to ms amare

9.952 "artificer, the"

G reverts to ms period-cap

9.968 "O! Father"

G reverts to less-happy ms comma

9.1008 "Maynooth: an"

G reverts to ms period-cap

9.1045 "giants, ghosts,"

G neglects rhythmically-happy swap

9.1093 "Ængus"

G reverts to Ae, but HTML supports it so I'll keep it (also 9.1206)

9.1108 "After. His lub back: I followed."

messy-- G plays safe and restores ms period-and-colon

9.1126 "-- John"

G restores dash but doesn't indent

9.1143 "-- I"

G restores dash but doesn't indent

9.1171 "-- Everyman "

G restores dash

9.1214 "them. Step"

G reverts to ms comma-no-cap

Wandering Rocks: [Barger] [Theall] [Toronto] [Bibliomania]

10.4 "Dignam, yes."

G reverts to period-cap

10.4 "iustum"

maybe justum?

10.53 "letterbox."

I accept G's period, crediting Dalton

10.74 "no tramline"

G fails to revert to ms despite typo

10.79 "smelt"

maybe smelled

10.89 "tobacconist"

G restores ms cap

10.100 "lying"

G reverts to dubious ms 'lie'

10.108 "onto"

also 10.111

10.141 "grinned"

G reverts to (jarring) ms grimaced

10.178 "don"

G reverts to tempting cap

10.303 "said, and"

G reverts to period-cap

10.600 "J."

G de-points

10.612 "déshabillé"

G reverts temptingly to no-accents

10.614 "eyeing"

G reverts to oddlooking eying

10.635 "it and"

G restores unneeded comma

10.654 "Williams'"

J 'corrected' William's to unhappy Williams's

10.657 "Lord Jesus"

G reverts to lord, but this is SiD's voice

10.658 "John the"

G reverts to comma

10.714 "mouth:"

G restores dubious 'mouth gently'

10.718 "James's Gate"

G decaps gate

10.720 "street past"

G accepts unneeded "s6" comma

10.728 "combustion: most"

G reverts to inferior period-cap

10.731 "Now you're"

I accept G's restoration of contraction, but not the comma

10.734 "I said, quietly"

G rejects this interesting comma

10.741 "answered stopping"

G restores doubtful comma

10.757 "Lambert's"

G restores doubtful Ned

10.781 "street. Times"

G plausibly rejects new-paragraph

10.793 "fall"

G accepts "tB"s unneeded period

10.805 "evil lights"

G idiotically restores comma

10.826 "butcher were"

I hesitantly accept G's reversion to no-comma

10.893 "Long John"

G de-caps long thruout

10.930 "Ford of Hurdles"

G decaps

10.938 "wait"

G's cap is semantically significant

10.973 "here, Martin"

I accept Dalton's comma

10.980 "quoted elegantly"

G restores unneeded comma

10.984 "la Maison Claire"

G de-italicizes and decaps maison to match 8.586

10.988 "uncertainly with"

G restores unneeded comma

10.1010 "even and"

G imposes plausible comma, pleading "e"

10.1033 "stood. John"

I accept G's period, rejecting Budgen's semicolon

10.1040 "lieutenant general"

G reverts to compound to match below, but this is speech not thought...?

10.1044 "Haines:"

I accept G's colon

10.1078 "Professor"

G decaps

10.1102 "Farrell with"

I reject Dalton's plausible comma

10.1105 "Park"

I reject Dalton's decap

10.1109 "Wilde's"

G restores unneeded 'house'

10.1110 "Metropolitan Hall"

G decaps hall

10.1134 "sergeant major"

G imposes compound, but this is a boy reading a poster!

10.1135 "God"

G reverts to unhappy Gob

10.1173 "Father"

I accept Dalton's cap

10.1176 "Lady"

I don't accept Dalton's decap thruout (also Lord)

10.1177 "Hesseltine"

G corrects to Heseltine thruout

10.1180 "Phoenix Park"

I reject Dalton's decap

10.1186 "Arran Quay"

I reject Dalton's decap

10.1191 "costsbag"

G imposes costbag for consistency with 10.472

10.1193 "Reuben J. Dodd"

G depoints

10.1198 "Ormond Hotel"

G decaps hotel

10.1215 "all times ticking"

G reverts to unahppily-ambiguous compound

10.1218 "lady Dudley"

J's inconsistency

10.1218 "Dudley on him"

G restores 'fixed on him'

10.1220 "soubrette"

G rejects italics

10.1221 "skirt, smiled"

G rejects comma

10.1222 "Hesseltine and"

G restores unneeded comma

10.1238 "E.L.Y'S,"

I hesitantly accepy G's de-pointing of Y and S

10.1239 "Denis J. Maginni"

G depoints

10.1250 "cortège:"

G de-italicizes

10.1259 "Thrift"

G has conceded this now

10.1260 "Huggard started"

Dalton's comma is not required

10.1260 "hotel, Cashel"

Dalton's de-comma is not needed

10.1263 "street, by Trinity's postern, a"

G de-commafies, crediting Dalton

10.1277 "Landsdowne"

G corrects to Lansdowne

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