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Typescripts for ch6-8 show a hand that G calls 'sD' (for 'scribe' at D-level typescript) going thru and requesting splits for many compounds. Only a few of these show up in the placards, but I think the hand was J's.
Joyce never uses 'onto' in Ulysses, always 'on to'. He does compound it sometimes in FW, so I'm experimenting with allowing the compound form where it seems natural in Ulysses-- but this is risky because it often brings a subtle sense of precision.
1.83/5.11 "harbour mouth"
G reverts to compound
2.24 "Welloff people"
ms splits
2.115 "The fox burying his grandmother under a hollybush."
'holly bush' in ms
2.121 "Quickly they were gone and from the lumberroom came the rattle of sticks"
'lumber room' in ms
2.141 "underfoot"
1922 has split (also 2.147)
2.167 "swaddling bands"
G reverts (?) to compound
2.341 "cattledoctors"
J switched to compound
2.366 "thickplotting"
J switched to compound
2.416 "cattletraders'"
J switched to compound
3.54 "hinderparts"
J switched to compound
3.116 "bald poll!"
G reverts to compound, but that rhythm doesn't work for me with the exclam
3.240 "tobacco shreds"
G opts for compound
3.261 "boys of"
G goes with ms-only compound
3.353 "Out of that"
G reverts to pointless ms compound
3.487 "his my"
G reverts to unhappy ms compound
4.107 "whiffs of ginger, teadust, biscuitmush"
ms had biscuit mush
4.110 "cattlemarket"
ms had split (also 4.159)
4.111 "Bald head"
G reverts (?) to ms compund
4.145 "willowpatterned dish"
J requested compound
4.206 "Molly in Citron's basketchair."
ms had split
4.236 "Valuation is only twentyeight."
J requested compound
4.283 "He filled his own moustachecup"
J requested compound
4.288 "looking glass"
G reverts to ms compound
4.489 "Just had a wash and brushup."
J requested compound
5.53 "postoffice"
ms had split
5.102 "blanketcloth"
ms had split
5.331 "distinguished looking... altar rails... confession box... witness box"
G reverts to compounds
5.383 "shiftylooking"
J requested compound
5.518 "coolwrappered"
J requested compound
6.11 "carriage window"
G reverts to plausible compound (typescript lost)
6.30 "tramtracks"
ms had split
6.169 "waistcoat pocket"
G rejects split
6.222 "topnobbers"
ms had split
6.393 "Roast beef for old England."
ms lacked split
6.625 "baldheaded business men"
G innovates compound
6.661 "Secret eyes, secret searching."
G sees compound in ms
6.776 "corpse manure"
ms had compound
6.986 "fever pit"
G reverts (?) compound-plural, overriding "a1"; I revert to singular to match 'chamber'
6.1011 "bowling green"
G rejects sD split
7.33 "printing works"
G rejects sD split
7.57 "Jesus Mario"
Kidd accepts G's reversion to Jesusmario, but I don't see how the printer could have misread the typescript in exactly the style of the manuscript!?!
7.157 "High class"
G quietly reverts to compound
7.220 "Twentyeight... MacHugh... windowpane... ninetyfive... barefoot"
sD requests splits (note for MacHugh: "esp. fine")
7.342 "blow out... Twenty eight"
G rejects sD splits
7.462 "cigarette case"
G overrides "a1" to impose compund, pleading only "e"!?
7.514 "railway line"
G rejects happy sD split (also 7.588)
7.669 "publichouse... publichouse... leadenfooted... wellchosen... matchbox... soultransfigured... soultransfiguring"
sD requested splits
7.734 "gutter sheet... master mystic"
G reverts to compounds-- but no sD requests here???
7.757 "Michelangelo"
sD (?) requested 'Michael Angelo'
7.760 "cigarette case"
G rejects sD split (also 7.791)
7.814 "sick bed"
G innovates compound, crediting Dalton
7.838 "highpriest... letterbox moneybox"
sD requests splits (not 7.832 highpriest though)
7.892 "boosing shed"
G imposes compound, for odd reasons
7.940 "dining rooms'
8.39 "bridge piers"
8.52 "quay walls"
8.57 "thirtytwo"
8.79 "sea birds"
8.79 "seagoose"
8.85 "chestnut meal"
8.100 "Flybynight"
8.109 "Timeball on the ballast office"
8.112 "pikehoses"
8.132 "show cart... blotting paper"
8.159 "ninetyfour"
8.163 "elephantgrey"
8.169 "Rabbit pie"
8.171 "wallpaper, Dockrell's"
8.172 "bathwater"
8.182 "waxedup"
8.185 "supper room"
8.199 "herself"
8.200 "hairpins"
8.201 "beddyhouse"
8.225 "womaneyes"
8.229 "rattlesnakes... lawbooks... handbag"
8.271 "mockturtle"
8.279 "masterstroke"
8.296 "heavy stringed"
8.297 "skullpiece... dustcoat... lampposts... Goodbye... skullpiece... fortyfour... vicereine... Foodheated... cobblestones... sourapple"
8.384 "twentyone,"
8.407 "Goose step"
8.423 "horse policeman"
8.445 "plain clothes"
8.446 "Squarepushing... Hotblooded... squareheaded... Homerule... northwest"
8.455 "get along"
8.456 "Tobacco shopgirls"
8.473 "Home Rule"
8.486 "piledup... jerrybuilt... woebegone...twoheaded"
8.499 "silver ware"
8.537 "Wind and watery"
8.552 "field glasses"
8.553 "Wellmannered"
8.557 "cloak rooms"
8.584 "pineapple"
8.593 "quick breathing"
8.597 "streetwalkers... harvestmoon... twentythree... hoofthuds... chawbacon... rainwater... Sunwarm... meatjuice"
8.615 "silk dames and dowagers"
8.617 "Country bred"
8.635 "silk webs"
8.670 "cigarette smoke"
8.711 "drinkingcup... sheepsnouts bloodypapered... nosejam"
8.715 "soup pot"
8.730 "smoking hot"
8.801 "boxing match"
8.809 "tuckstitched shirtsleeves... horseflesh... Orangegroves"
8.834 "petty cash"
8.898 "winepress... earwigs... gumjelly... nannygoat"
8.975 "tearwashed... gingerpop... Breadsoda... suckingbottle... closestools... bookstore... dyeworks... Postoffice'"
8.1032 "cobble stones"
8.1064 "watering places... wall face... public house"
8.1119 "Work basket"
9.39 "Godspeed"
9.492 "pseudomalachi"
9.630 "gombeen woman"
10.1040 "lieutenant general"
10.1134 "sergeant major"
10.1215 "all times ticking"
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G rejects sD split
8.28 "auctionrooms"sD requests split (although the symbol may be modified to mean 'stet'?)
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normal ditto special?G rejects sD split
G rejects 1922 split, probably J's
sD requests split
G rejects 1922 split, probably J's
sD requests split
G overrides "a4" to restore compound
1922 has plausible 3 words
sD requests both be split, 1922 splits the latter (also at 8.114), G rejects splits
G reverts to plausible ms two-words, blaming typist, but it was never fixed (also 8.1148)
G rejects splits
sD requests split
G says J requested compound at "a1" (against episode style?)
G perversely rejects ms AND sD, opting for compound
G opts for period (sD requests 'wall paper'!??)
sD requests split
sD requests 'waxe dup'???
G rejects sD split
G reverts to two words, blaming typist--though sD doesn't split
sD requests split
sD requests split
sD requests split
sD requests splits
sD requests split
sD requests split
G reverts to compound, overriding sD
sD requests splits
sD requested split (also 8.387) and comma, "a1" undid the split (!?), G rejects the comma
G sees (ambiguous) compound
G rejects sD split
G reverts to compound overriding "sD" and "a1"
sD requests split, reversed by 'bon' in margin (also for plainclothes above)
G quietly reverts to 'gelong' (blaming printer!??)
sD requests 3 words, G grants one only
sD requested split, marginal 'bon' reversed this, G opts for plausible Homerule
sD requests splits
G rejects split that sD requested and got
G overrides successful sD to restore too-happy compound
G rejects successful sD split
sD requests split
G rejects sD split
sD requests split, reversed in margin
G rejects sD split
sD requests splits
1922 has a comma after silk, G opts for silkdames
G rejects sD split
G rejects sD split
G reverts to compound (plausibly blaming typist)
sD requests splits
G rejects sD's split
G overrides sD and "a4" to restore compound
G reverts to plausible compound
sD requests splits
G rejects sD's split
sD requests splits
sD requests splits
G temptingly rejects sD split
G rejects sD splits
G blames split on typist
G reverts to two words
G reverts to ms 'pseudo Malachi' which I'll accept only if 'pseudomalachi' can't refer to Photius...?
G reverts to ms compound
G reverts to compound to match below, but this is speech not thought...?
G imposes compound, but this is a boy reading a poster!
G reverts to unahppily-ambiguous compound
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